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At 4pm the cockerel crowed,a raucous shout to greet a dawn long since fledthrough deep blue morning and onwards still.For a moment the whole day pausedas it to ask if it were wrong,had risen too...

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Ah, the follies of yesteryear. Did it really happen?

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"For a moment the whole day paused as it to ask if it were wrong, had risen too soon, prematurely slipped moorings, set joyful sails rippling. He called again, oblivious... certain in himself."...

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I like this.  Funny things make us pause and question our sense of time and space ... giving a disjointed moment.  Don't question the bird.  He clearly knew what he was doing  haha.  

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Very thoughtful Soulsease.Made me stop and think.Keep writing, especially your form writings.You're amazingly talented!

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Hi all - sorry for the late response! Karen - it did indeed - I remember it vividly. Strange time for a cockerel to crow, and strange images evoked... Aaron - thanks for the catch! Beth - absolutely!...

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